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Though I like the editing done and the thought of a green horse is entertaining, I don’t really see what the argument is here other than seeing things that you normally don’t.
You did a great job editing your images, the green horse is great. The only thing I would add is some text so people would understand what your argument is. Right now you can’t really tell what your argument is based just on the pictures.
Im not sure what your trying to argue, with life sized vegetables and horses that look like there are from the land of Oz. The third picture is really cool and the ghost effects are sweet but i still am missing the overall argument to your piece.
I find this a compelling concept piece. The first two images make a strong comment on genetic engineering. All three images of a whole convey the subjectivity of images in a digital world. The third image seems a bit at odds with the first two, however. It conforms to the theme of manipulation, but not with the theme of genetic engineering (if indeed you are going for this theme). I am curious at how you are going to incorporate a textual message in this sequence. Right now, I think your caption is a bit too allusive. Think about refining your text so that it focuses on an argumentative point. I admire your skill with Photoshop.
I like the way you edited the pictures in Photoshop, you really did a nice job. I think you should add some writing to your piece because I am kinda not sure what your argument is but the pictures overall are phenomenal.
October 22, 2009 at 8:46 pm |
Though I like the editing done and the thought of a green horse is entertaining, I don’t really see what the argument is here other than seeing things that you normally don’t.
October 22, 2009 at 8:53 pm |
I really like the picture with the ghosts. In all, I think the pictures were good, but I’m not too sure about what the argument is.
October 22, 2009 at 8:54 pm |
You did a great job editing your images, the green horse is great. The only thing I would add is some text so people would understand what your argument is. Right now you can’t really tell what your argument is based just on the pictures.
October 22, 2009 at 8:56 pm |
Im not sure what your trying to argue, with life sized vegetables and horses that look like there are from the land of Oz. The third picture is really cool and the ghost effects are sweet but i still am missing the overall argument to your piece.
October 25, 2009 at 11:04 pm |
I find this a compelling concept piece. The first two images make a strong comment on genetic engineering. All three images of a whole convey the subjectivity of images in a digital world. The third image seems a bit at odds with the first two, however. It conforms to the theme of manipulation, but not with the theme of genetic engineering (if indeed you are going for this theme). I am curious at how you are going to incorporate a textual message in this sequence. Right now, I think your caption is a bit too allusive. Think about refining your text so that it focuses on an argumentative point. I admire your skill with Photoshop.
October 28, 2009 at 11:46 pm |
I like the way you edited the pictures in Photoshop, you really did a nice job. I think you should add some writing to your piece because I am kinda not sure what your argument is but the pictures overall are phenomenal.